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Tkhobbes 17:11, 15 August 2006 (UTC) I have added a summary, and thus altered the "summary" section according to my needs. In this novel, Elias Vaughn is not yet second-in-command on DS9, so I removed the respective line in the "background" section. I also altered the "characters" section to match the knowledge available on this book (for example, there is no evidence on commander Vaughn's daughter - this will be revealed in one of the later books)

Looks very good! I always appreciate a novel page getting a facelift.
I've been trying to regularize the styles of the pages (see also Template:Sidebar novel), a few of the tweaks i think are nice are to keep subsection titles simple ("summary" rather than "plot summary", etc), so i tried to fix some of it.. feel free to introduce additional third level subsections (===) for "chapter one" , etc, or however the book labels them. Also, any characters that only appear in this novel could be defined in a yet-to-be-made "other characters" subsection. -- Captain M.K.B. 19:01, 15 August 2006 (UTC)

That's fine, thank you! However, something apparently went wrong between the section "from the book jacket" and my actual summary... I did not know how to correct that - if someone knows how, feal free, if not, I will dig into this in a few days... Tkhobbes 18:07, 21 August 2006 (UTC)

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