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Changes made to page:
- 1.)A road connected this city to Oakland and Bay Farm Island. Changed road to highway. Highway is defined as a, A main, direct public road, especially a multi-lane, high speed thoroughfare connecting major population centers. ()
- 2.)In 1986, the location of Alameda was depicted on a San Francisco Municipal Railway system map. Changed to, In 1986, its location in the East Bay was labeled on a MUNI system map. The San Francisco Bay Area is divided into four sections: North, East, South, and West. East Bay is the proper name for this region. Included link to Wikipedia site for the East Bay as it isn't mentioned in the canon. MUNI is shorthand for this transit system, and is used far more commonly than the other name.
- 3.) In the alternate reality of 2259, the island on which Alameda was situated on was seen in a map of the San Francisco Bay. Changed to, In the alternate reality of 2259, Alameda's island was visible on a map of the San Francisco Bay. Visible is defined as, Able to be seen.  I have seen this word used in a caption for the Madaba Map, Walls are visible around the big cities, including Jerusalem, Jericho, and Ashdod. Jerusalem is the focus of the map. Clearly visible are the north-south Cardo and valley streets (lined with columns), the Damascus Gate plaza and pillar, the city walls, the Church of the Holy Sepulcher, the Church of Holy Zion (Hagia Sion), and Justinian's "Nea" Church.  So, the usage is exceptable English.
- 4.) This map was part of a collection of graphics and video media that were displayed on a powerwall in the offices of Admirals Christopher Pike and Alexander Marcus at Starfleet Headquarters. Videos of both show that only the powerwall in Pike's office has the map. ;  Dropped reference to Admiral Marcus.Lakenheath72 (talk) 00:35, February 13, 2015 (UTC)