Changes: Brettner

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Riker personnel file 2 remastered — Brettner in Riker's service record

In 2367, while exploring a cavern on Alpha Onias III, Commander William T. Riker was rendered unconscious by gases. While unconscious, neural scanners scanned Riker's brain. The scanners used elements of Riker's reality and constructed a holodeck simulation with those elements interspersed throughout, so that it felt real to him. What Riker wanted, the scanners made possible.

In one of these simulations, Starfleet Admiral Brettner awarded a commendation for exceptional leadership to Captain Riker, of the USS Enterprise-D, on stardate 57398, during the joint Excalbian Campaign. In 2383, this admiral was mentioned in Riker's service record that was on display in his quarters on the Enterprise-D. (TNG-R: "Future Imperfect", okudagram)

For the remastered episode of "Future Imperfect", the original text of Riker's service record was replaced.

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-In [[2367]], while exploring a cavern on [[Alpha Onias III]], [[Commander]] [[William T. Riker]] was rendered unconscious by [[gas]]es. While unconscious, [[neural scanner]]s scanned [[Commander]] [[William T. Riker]]'s brain. The scanners used elements of Riker's reality and constructed a [[holodeck simulation]] with those elements interspersed throughout, so that it felt real to him. What Riker wanted, the scanners made possible.
+In [[2367]], while exploring a [[cavern]] on [[Alpha Onias III]], [[Commander]] [[William T. Riker]] was rendered unconscious by [[gas]]es. While unconscious, [[neural scanner]]s scanned Riker's brain. The scanners used elements of Riker's reality and constructed a [[holodeck simulation]] with those elements interspersed throughout, so that it felt real to him. What Riker wanted, the scanners made possible.
-In one of these simulations, [[Starfleet]] [[Admiral]] [[Brettner]] awarded a commendation for exceptional leadership to [[Captain]] Riker, of the {{USS|Enterprise|NCC-1701-D|-D}}, on [[stardate]] 57398, during the joint [[Excalbian Campaign]]. In [[2283]], this admiral was mentioned in Riker's service record that was on display in his [[quarters]] on the ''Enterprise-D''. ({{TNG|Future Imperfect}}, ''[[okudagram]]'')
+In one of these simulations, [[Starfleet]] [[Admiral]] '''Brettner''' awarded a commendation for exceptional leadership to [[Captain]] Riker, of the {{USS|Enterprise|NCC-1701-D|-D}}, on [[stardate]] 57398, during the joint [[Excalbian Campaign]]. In [[2383]], this admiral was mentioned in Riker's [[personnel file|service record]] that was on display in his [[quarters]] on the ''Enterprise''-D. ({{TNG-R|Future Imperfect}}, ''[[okudagram]]'')
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